Calm but heard of
I've heard a lot of songs with the same calming mood. I'm not saying you stole it, but theres a lot of songs with this calming relaxing mood.
But there are some unique things about this song.
Your echoeing is very nice, towards the end, the low to high to low to high was a very nice ending and the sounds from left to right speakers at the high to low were awesome, haven't seen anything like that.
Too mixed up
Yes, the solo is much better than this.
The guitar and the percussion wasn't bad, but they didn't go along with each other.
The guitar lows were pretty bad, and it sounded like it had some bad frequency.
Just keep working on your guitar and fix the lows.
I hate to break this to you...
But this is the FL Slayer. Not real guitar.
I wish I was that good.
Nice.
The nice solo guitar was pretty amusing. The sudden lows and highs were the only problem in the song.
And at 00:30 I could swear you were playing the beginning to Fur Elise.
The guitar was also a bit scratchy and at times it seems you were just doing it out of your head doing something random.
At some parts, you had a good rhythm and it sounded like you planned it out.
It DOES sound like Fur Elise.
It was random. For most of it I just laid out random notes until I got it to sound good.
If it sounds planned, that's because it's not a real guitar, FL Slayer.
:P
If I was that good, then I would be a tenth member of Slipknot by now.
Nice techno beats
You have some good techno beats there. You have a good combination of sounds and it loops fairly well. Your pattern is very very nice, it's seriously it's nice. You have a good stable pattern with some solo sounds.
Whoa nice
Wow, this really is a nice mix of beats here. It has a nice uplifting dance beat along with that sound there that really has a good morning-feeling. Your patterns don't get too repitive which is nice, though, dancing to this..well I can't really imagine what dance would fit this song.
Also, it doesn't have a mysterious feeling to it, which is good because this is a dance song.
I have trouble categorising my stuff to be honest, my styles are such a mish-mash of genres that I just try to put something that fits with it ^^
I'm glad you enjoyed it! and hopefully one day I'll finish one of these half made things :D
oh and the drums are only tempory samples :P lots of tinkering to be done before completion :P
Good theme, but screeches
It does have a good relaxing space theme, but that thing that keeps going "OOOO...ooooo" has a pretty high pitch it almost sounds like screeches. It needs a lower pitch.
This would be a good background space game flash.
You'll hate me for saying this but I'm not exactly sure what part you are referring to, but if it's the one I think you are talking about then I tried that. When I did change it, it gave the song a different feel to it which edged away from what I really wanted.
Thanks for your input though, everyone's entitled to their opinion ^_^
Good combining
The combination of your sounds mixed really well with the song. I wouldn't say it gave me a dark feeling, but it certainly was a mysterious feeling.
At 1:22 that added instrument was great to the mysterious feeling of the song.
I agree most deffenatly. I was going for something dark but i can see the mystery in the song. It works out either way i mean i'm happy if any of my songs give a emotion or feeling or even tell a story =). Thanks for the interview =)
Reviewing it!
Okay, so you have some great simple beats there. But it actually did get repititive.
I did think you were going to use the same instruments over and over, but at half time, you added some more nice beats there, but those were a little repitive.
I think if you got rid of that sound that sorta sounded like tapping and replace it, you could of set a good calm and relaxing mood and a better song.
I knew this would get the repetitive complaint because its some of my earlier work that i just fixed up and added some voice samples to. However who knows i may redo some more of this and add it again. We'll have t o see =). Glad you at least found it nice enough to give it a 8 =) thanks much! Feel free to check out more of my stuff. Especually some of my newer stuff. Much love and thanks for the review!
nice tone
This song has a nice tone to it actually, but I'm not sure if the genre should be industrial.
But your beat's pattern is very nice.
Reptitive
It wasn't annoying, the main beat was good, but the background hip-hop beat didn't really do much.
It sounded the same all throughout the song, so I do think you should of had more hip-hop beats there instead of one.
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