Original
The beginning sounded real classical
Really, this is one awesome classical song you've made.
Although you say its an intro, a full song would be awesome than. The pattern is great here.
Major originality points I give you.
Original
The beginning sounded real classical
Really, this is one awesome classical song you've made.
Although you say its an intro, a full song would be awesome than. The pattern is great here.
Major originality points I give you.
Well.... the thing is... this isnt a original track :S Its from a game called just this. i set it on misc, since its mixed styles :p
Great beats
Beats were nice and the pattern was insanely great.
So I go to the ending, really great, the quiet fade effect goes good with the song.
I'm glad you think so.
Paradox?
At the beginning I would not of thought this to be scary, but later the other sounds did make it horror-ish. I wouldn't actually download and listen, but its a great flash song. But I'm still wondering, the instruments are ambient, but they give off a scary feeling.
Violins were also pretty scary, you probably made the guitar and violin scary instruments in this song. And ambient music is usually calm, lol, probably the first paradox songs I've heard. Nice job though.
I spent a good bit of time working on getting a certain feel to this song. I used Adobe Audition and a bunch of separate loops to make the whole song. It would have came out better if the program didn't throw of the voluming and some of the timing. That's why it kinda chopped a lot in towards the middle. It sounded a lot different before I merged the tracks.
Thanks for a good review though. I tried to do something different with this one, but it got a little tossed in the mixing of the tracks... the school had some cheap computers.
Country ROCK
Nice country beats with the guitar. The percussion was repeated and think it should of gotten a better pattern to it. The guitar was also a little unclear and a little fuzzy. But not every guitar played in the song was like that.
Was this computer guitar or your actually playing the guitar?
Either way, its a pretty good song.
The song was made in Adobe Audition. All the guitars and stuff was prerecorded loops that I pieced together to make this song. Everything sounds like is because the loops had a preset quality. The song would have been better if I didn't have a jerk of a teacher breathing down my back. I made the song myself, but he kept being a pain about dead-lines. He wouldn't get any new loops either.
Thanks for the good score anyways. It was my first song and I had a very limited number of things to use. Had I had more loops and stuff I could have made a much better song.
Way better.
Beats combine well in this song. The vocals were random and funny.
Pattern doesn't repeat too much which is good, but I think more energy levels from this song would be much better.
thnx for the review im glad you like it. :)
Yes, it weird
Seems a little repetitive, but combining the beats in this song did good.
Pattern is nice too and the looping works. Start and finish are the same beats.
This song would work better in a flash, although, can't really think of an envirorment for it.
thnx for the revieuw
Good
The beginning seemed maybe a little montonous, but the beats to accompany it make it better.
This song is one of the better songs I've seen you make.
At 1:28, what seems like a bass is awesome. Good low tone and pattern.
I think some background beats can be taken out because it does seem too much.
thnx for the review. most of the music ive posted here is simple experimentation so its all a bit sketchy. chek back in a few weeks and youl see better version and new music ;)
Getting better.
Some beats in this song are actually pretty good, but the whole thing does seem a bit random. Establishing a good pattern in beats would be better. Most of the beats in the song don't combine well and sound too different from each other.
Actually at the end, when some beats combine better, the song gets a little better.
Just some tough critism I've been giving, don't take it like an abusive review.
all feedback is good feedback. thanx for the advice. ill make an updated version with a more whole sound.
Wilmer
Needs to be redone
Really weird song, I would not want to listen to this. The beat combination did not go well with each other, and it was way to repetitive.
Then it realy got screeching at the high pitches.
Also at 1:47, whats with the sudden ending, then the huge silence until the end of song. That should be cut out.
yeah i noticed the ending to, i screwed up the cut. ill correct the error later.
The violin FTW
It was okay, but the obeo and the other instruments did'nt really follow the same pattern.
At 00:56, the violin was just amazing. Seriously, you can make an awesome song by just using the violin and maybe a couple of background instruments.
Violin really did it for the song.
yay this was just experemental, trust me theres better violin parts so yep another song will be out soon :) thanks for the review.
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