Good beats, more energy.
So, lets see here.
The beginning starts off nice, then comes, what I think, cymbols, which give it a nice beat. Closing to a minute, the extra primary beat gives it a nice rhythm. So, it does start off good. The pause from the primary beat gives the song a good break, although it needs more energy to it.
Well, you have good patterns and combination of beats, but the beats should have more energy. It would sound like a good battle song though.